Sunday, December 15, 2013

My First Attempt Drafts Working on a Children's Story



I'm currently working on my first attempt to create a children's story, I know it needs a lot of work, but I really want to get as much feedback as possible on what flaws are most apparent...


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Waiting for your critique and opinions in the comments below.

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